Southern Beledira on parchment

[Juggernaut1981]

Either there is some funky stuff going on with the topography around your "top forest & little lake" or the River Police are going to have your ass.

Thoughts...

• Rivers are too smooth, unless this land is on a 45 degree slope
• Get advice from the River Police
• Make the "blurb" part of the Cartouche smaller... you lose the title of the place

[Notsonoble]

At least part of the problem is the north edge of the map lined up with a mountain range when I grabbed from the larger section. I've been contemplating moving up the map a tad to make the range visible, but I've got so little room before cutting off the that southern most peninsula...

But I am sorta hopping they'll show up soon.

Smooth issues I've noticed... I haven't applied any jitter to their paths yet...

Thanks on the text by the way... I'm trying to figure out what to do there... at 300ppi though I can't go any smaller with the blurb... unless I stretch the box over that little island (which is rather un-important to the cartographer or his commissioner at the time in-setting)...