Tyalon

[landorl]

I agree with what others have said about the mountains.

Also, some of your rivers behave a little odd. They aren't outright bad, but just odd. Specifically, there are two that stand out. The large river that runs through Sindrichion and Berion to the mountains, flows for a long way along the coastline. It's not impossible, but I don't see terrain features that would indicate a river valley there.

The other one is the river in the southeast from Hammersund to Die Eiserne, and it is the same issue.

Other than that, the map looks good. I do think that reducing the fonts a little will let the map itself show a little more.

[TBF]

I agree with what others have said about the mountains.

Also, some of your rivers behave a little odd. They aren't outright bad, but just odd. Specifically, there are two that stand out. The large river that runs through Sindrichion and Berion to the mountains, flows for a long way along the coastline. It's not impossible, but I don't see terrain features that would indicate a river valley there.

The other one is the river in the southeast from Hammersund to Die Eiserne, and it is the same issue.

Other than that, the map looks good. I do think that reducing the fonts a little will let the map itself show a little more.

They look a little odd, because i draw the political map first and then i noticed that i needed something for the border^^. The variant of the continent you see there is the last of a row. But unfortunately the maps are on the harddisk drive of my old computer and i am just to lazy to tow it three levels up.^^ So i had to work with the alpha AutoREALM Version of it. And there are the rivers actually absolutely odd.^^

[TBF]

this weekend in found time to edit the map.
The down-scaling at the grass-pattern working worked and i draw the peak lines more accurated(actually i misunderstood for what they are good). Furthermore i disabled the texture-layer, i think the map looks so more bright.
As everytime i am interested in your suggestions.