Now I am in trouble with the second Map, here is the description of the location :
"The heavy scent of blood taints the air as the short corridor opens into a large ledge at the top of a vast open pit. This natural chasm drops over one hundred feet to an underground lake of blood below. Countless skulls line the walls of the pit shaft, each of which drains a torrent of blood into the lake in frothing red coils. Off to the left a small corridor slopes down into the darkness."
Here is my attemp at it.
What should I do do improve this? Please help me...

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