Quote Originally Posted by Fransie View Post
Here's an update. The most important change is the way the mountains are represented. I'd like to hear your comments.
That's a nice style. I think overall the mountains get too dark in Marbuk, what i'm seeing outside of Marbuk works better IMHO.

Also your transparent stroked type "Crescent Range" works very badly against the dark, busy background of your mountains -- and would probably still be a problem if you lightened the mountains.