The start of and In-Depth Endeavor

[tilt]

heres a little guide - the NE river violation is easy to fix - the next 2 there are too many rivers floating from lake to lake. Just remember that a river always only flows one way. Two rivers can meet but only one flows on ... think of mad max cage fighting ... two rivers enter - one river leaves
otherwise- looking really good - I'd perhaps use some smaller lettering as the texts domiate your map and takes away the attention from it, and as mentioned above - the waves are rather dominating too - but cool map - nice beginning