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    Map La Vallée des Lucioles - Legend of the Five Rings

    The map of "La Vallée des Lucioles". It's a personal work for my tabletop rpg group.
    Like the other maps, the line is handmade, with ink and the color with Photoshop.

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    Legend of the Five Rings - Fantasy Flight Games/Edge Entertainment

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    Another great piece, Akae! You really manage pull off the heavy textured look with ease on these pieces!

    Only slight crit I would have is that some of the forests (that don't really get any of the heavier texturing) look a little flat e.g. to the right of number 1, and a bit more linework here I think would look better. That is really nitpicking though and it's a great piece all round!

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    You have the cliff thing down! another beauty. Think the translucent box is a little tight at the bottom. Also the type in the dots, maybe slightly smaller to give it a little room to breath inside the circle? The greens are really nice palette. Thanks for sharing, always look forward to your maps.

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    Thanks for your advice Snodsy and GLS. For the texture of the forests, I admit it's for go faster ^^

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    This is a splendid piece (again) Akae. It's a fantastic layout and your colours are just wonderful. Have some rep!
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    Great work Akae. The palette is beautiful as is the map in general. I always find your work very inspiring!

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    Nice work with this. I love how you've created the sense of height with the cliffs and rocky outcrops, and how they give the terrain a lumpy, bumpy feel. Maybe more of the buildings could have done with some shadows to give the same sense of height? They seem a little flat in comparison. I'm nitpicking though. It's a fantastic map!
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    @ ChickPea : Because I did not have much time before the start of the game. ^^ It is an excellent remark, I made it also! Thanks a lot

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    I love your particular style, particularly the color palette and way of representing the topography. Awesome work again, Akae.

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    Just shared this on Facebook, incredible work man, love it! Rep if I can! =)
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