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    Question Town map question

    Is that looks good?
    If not - tell me what is Your idea to improve it's look.

    That's that map:
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    Guild Adept atpollard's Avatar
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    I like it.
    The only suggestion that I can make is to vary the line thicknesses more.
    Some lines are more important than others and the line weight should reflect that.

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    Guild Artisan eViLe_eAgLe's Avatar
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    That is line-ist, all lines are equal.

    Jokes aside, I like it and think it could be refined and made awesome. (I also agree with atpollard about the line weight.)

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    I really like the style and the line quality; it reminds me of the kinds of illustrations that were made for the adventure stories of the early to mid 1900's. I think the color might be a bit garish. I'd tone down the green, at least. While you might be able to find a pigment that was that bright on the paper when first applied, by the time the edges of the page were that distressed, I should expect the color to have faded quite a bit. That is only an opinion, though, and I almost always think things should be desaturated.
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    I like it overall, but the yellow does hurt my eyes a bit.

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