Storis

[ravells]

What software are you using now, Hafnium? You can put this under your name on the left so we don't keep asking you the same question!

I like the textures you've used but the forest and mountain outlines are a bit hard and unnatural (unless that's the look you're going for). Try breaking up the outline a bit. Once I know what software you're using it'll be easier to give C&Cs and help.

Cheers and welcome to the guild,

Ravs

[Hafnium]

Ok. I used Paint.NET to edit a jpg I made in paint a few years ago. I know the layout is garbage. I left a bit out of my first post.

My river thing looks like garbage. Without outlining, how could I fix that?

The mountain in the north looks like a bloated slug. I know. How do you suggest texturing a mountain?

Attached is a version with a little less blur on the land mass. Does it look better?

All the textures are clouds rendered by PDN blended in. I'll attach one without them so you can see whats under the hood.

[Hafnium]

Here's another with shading. It reduced the slug-ness of the mountains.