WIP – Volcanic Island

[Alfar]

I like the forests and cliffs - very nice. Your volcano feels a little flat to me, though.

Also, the smoke looks somewhat odd - maybe it's the slant on it? Heavy wind from the west? Could also be that it doesn't fade out evenly at the top - if it's dispersing at the edges, I'd expect it to disperse in the middle of the smoke cloud, I guess.

[pasis]

I will defenately have a new go with the smoke as it is a new thing for me and it's fun to experiment. Usually the smoke spreads around to a large area and it would cover too large part of the island, so there is a balance I have to find here.