It's a good start...couple of things I noticed;


  1. Mountains - You covered what needs adjusting - otherwise they look pretty good
  2. Rivers - I think I would "cut" them into the forests if you can, that way they won't look like they are lieing on top of the trees
  3. Forests - I can't quite pin down what it is that looks 'off'. Might be the texture or maybe that the edges are so smooth. You might consider breaking up the edges a bit.
  4. Fonts - The black & gold? font's (river & forests names primarily), are very hard to read, try lowering the opacity of the stroke or switch to an outer glow. You may even consider changing the colors you used. I'd also consider changing city labels in the same manner.

Looking forward to your next update.