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    Ok, what do you think of it now?

    I did the gradient thingy (couldn't get the hand drawn version to look right) and both adjusted the shadows on the bucket and drawn a fuzy shadow line on the Eastern wall...


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    I think it looks great. I think we're to a point now that I have to ask. What do YOU think? (I'd be pretty proud if I were you.)
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    Well, right now, I am tired and sleepy :p

    I guess I will have to take a step or two back and look at it more objectively before giving a honest opinion... I will the two barrels on the West might need a bit more shadows dropped on them... but I think it is going to be a pretty cool map, I might end up liking it better than my "sunken temple" one. I really like the light effects...
    I guess, the next map will have to be a flooded cave with flaming debris floating around...

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    Very nice - I think you have it down now. Agree about extra shadows around barrels. Agree with jt.

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    Yep, the shadows on the barrels should only take a few minutes... So, hopefully, I can post the final version of the map tonight...

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    So, here is another version with more shadows on top of the barrels...

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    I think it looks great. I admire all the work you put into this and the finished product really shines.
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