As tilt said the text is pretty in your face. I figured out a pretty easy technique for monitor graphics while working on a recent map. Put everything you want the effect on in one layer with black background, duplicate the layer, blur the dup, lower the opacity, make a new layer on top and fill it with the smallest horizontal line patern (used Gimp but I'm sure PS has a similar pattern), lower the opacity on the pattern layer, and flatten all three layers. Put the new layer over your main image and set it to screen, addition or whatever works for you.