I think that this is an excellent map, and a really excellent first map.

Great use of bogie's textures - not too many that it clutters the map. Great use of stone textures, lighting, and the fire is really very well done. It's a really strong map visually with a very clear style. I'm also not bothered by correct lava shadows. Having said all that, although I love your map, I wouldn't use it because I can't really work out what's supposed to be going on. I play rpgs online and if I posted this map up for my PCs we'd all have a different idea of where we could move on the map and where we couldn't. I still really like it though, and look forward to see more of your work Hoob.