Welcome to the Guild PapersAndPaychecks! Nice job for a first attempt. I agree with my Korash and JB regarding the Hills coloring, and indeed it would be nice to see a larger res version of this map. However I think you've done very well for your first map. The compass, the scale and the borders all turned out great, and, aside from the foothills which need a little work, you did a nice job of coloring this map.

Cheers,
-Arsheesh