Dark Vision: Chapter 26: Leapfrog

[töff]

I have reached the end of the chapter! 18,756 words. They always tend to grow in revision. I'll post it when it's done.

I am poised for the rings of Saturn, now. That'll be Chapter 27. It will be a lot smaller, because there's so much less for a character to experience in the rings than on the surface of a planet or moon. Perhaps the Ceres one, too, will be shorter. As far as natural siteseeing, the rings (as beautiful as they are) and Ceres offer not a lot of variation in detail. -- They're still great choices for the story, though.

I am also eager to get back to the Solar System map, but ... work first, then play, right?

[The Cartographist]

Do you really think so? I think that the rings are a great place for all sorts of fun things to happen. At the macro level, they are seemingly pretty standard and seemingly static, but at the micro level, there could be an infinite variety of possibilities. Just my two cents...

[töff]

I'll try to do some justice to the rings.

Meanwhile ... I can't believe this! ... I have to bump the Titan chapter to the next issue! I ran way over page count, and Dark Vision, because it has both the Forepart and the Titan part, is the only fair candidate to split & bump.

Maybe I will make each chapter available in advance, eh? as a Carguil exclusive!

Criminy, if it ain't one thing it's another.