töff needs another project like a pig needs-- Jack Vance's "Ports Of Call" & "Lurulu"

[Steel General]

Personally, I like the version with the line having the dot on the end, though maybe make the line thinner and the dot a bit smaller.

Just my take on it...

[töff]

I like the version with the line

I played with the lines more but I didn't get anything that blew my skirt up.

I think the problem is that the cities need to be ON the planets. I can't use spatial relationships everywhere else and then throw them out the window for the cities. (Oh that was an odd metaphor.)

I'ma try to do get the city dots onto the planets. One planet has FIVE dots so I'm really worried about crowding.