Have some rep for posting your first map. It's looking pretty good also and all the rivers are in order.

Some criticism/suggestions:

- The large, handwritten font is beautiful, but it doesn't mix with the other fonts too well I think. You might want to experiment with some other fonts.
- The mountain range is really thin all over the place, you might want to broaden it at some places to give it a more natural feel.
- More a question: I am confused about some of the red lines, why do they run into the ocean?