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    Quote Originally Posted by waldronate View Post
    Nicely done. The base textures give it that warm feeling of old limestone.

    Two minor niggles: there are a fair number of overly straight parallel stream channels (nothing you can do about that; they are a common artifact of CG fluvial models) and the streams that descend to the river on the right wiggle rather more than I would expect. Water follows the path of steepest descent and the meanders in the stream are a bit out of place. It's what I would expect for a footpath (people don't always follow the path of steepest descent willingly) or a large river on an almost flat plain (where the river has to dissipate flow energy by going side-to-side and making meanders).
    Actually I think I can correct the GC artifacts because in photoshop it's just grey scale image and I can even out the paraller streams. I'll give it a try at least. Yeah the rivers...I always tend to have too wiggly river path and I'll take a look at them too.

    Attached is the waterfall I just added. I will tweak it, but I think I will keep it
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    Quote Originally Posted by pasis View Post
    Actually I think I can correct the GC artifacts because in photoshop it's just grey scale image and I can even out the paraller streams. I'll give it a try at least. Yeah the rivers...I always tend to have too wiggly river path and I'll take a look at them too.

    Attached is the waterfall I just added. I will tweak it, but I think I will keep it
    Hrm . . . I seem to remember seeing a really great tutorial on doing waterfalls in Photoshop. I'll have to see if I can find it again and forward it to you, if you are interested in seeing it. It was originally written for use as a post rendering edit for Terragen, but it might apply to what you're trying to accomplish.

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    Edit : Found a copy on my system. The images appear to be broken (invalid jpg files) but the text is still in good shape. You'll have to weed out the parts that apply to your efforts, and I'm almost sure there is another tutorial somewhere that I'll have to find. Add the one I do have as a zip file just in cas you're interested.
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    Not a bad waterfall. Something looks off though... can you mist it up?

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    I agree, unless it is falling into a deep pool with no rocks, the mist should be heavier.

    But overall a really nice attempt.
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    Have you tried how the mountains fit to a larger overland map ? I usually stumble a bit when it comes to doing that. :S

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    Thanks GW for the waterfall intructions. I took a look at it and saw few good tips.

    Jykke, yes I have considered making a larger map. I decided to try this smaller piece first and learn from it. With the bigger map comes lot more work and this smaller is a time consumer already.

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    Quote Originally Posted by pasis View Post
    Thanks GW for the waterfall intructions. I took a look at it and saw few good tips.

    Jykke, yes I have considered making a larger map. I decided to try this smaller piece first and learn from it. With the bigger map comes lot more work and this smaller is a time consumer already.
    I'm almost certain that I have another tutorial along the same lines that I used once, well before I joined the guild. Personally, I thought it was a bit better, so if I find it, I'll pass it along. Glad to hear that first one was helpful.

    BTW, I'm really loving this work your doing, a definite thumbs up from me.

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    Removed some of the height map artifacts by using healing brush tool. Improved the waterfall a bit and added a second one. Also created new terrain texture and applied it to lower lands. Added some hills and more forest (also made forest to go partially over the rivers). And then a lot of bits and pieces here and there that I don’t recall anymore.
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    This is a brilliant piece of work already, and I can't wait to see where you take it.
    It looks like a satellite photo made through a fantasy lens if that makes any sense. Or maybe something you would see in a scrying crystal ball.

    The only thoughts I can offer:
    Both the two little towers and the waterfalls caught my eye as being off perspective when compared to the top-downish mountains and rivers. The forests kind of get away with it, but also clash somewhat near mountaintops.

    Just food for thought.

    Anyway, keep up the astounding work, Pasis.

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    Wow, Great looking map!!!

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