It's always good be able to see your own progress. Some maps when you make them are obvious personal milestones when you look at them so I imagine this might be one for you.

I think it looks good. I like the colours, the text looks good, as do the forest and mountains and things. I think the map would look better with a proper border that matches the traditional style you've gone for. And your compass seems to have a square "halo" so it doesn't blend in completely to the map.

Unfortunately I don't think I can decypher many of the meanings! I know Silva is forest and I suspect Aureudom is something to do with gold.